WK 2:Mac Vs MV - Mac wins

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sick thinkin the Demon wont stretch you dual techs sing brngg brngg
this Djinn will really make you Illmac, there's a definite, ull be 6 ft with 2 rings

two barrel and a bloodstream.. in the long term this will get dirtier
cuz when I bring the pump and dump scheme you'll wish u sold off earlier

Really hate to start the voting on this1 in this manner, but I HAVE to, just to get this thread up & a tiny bit of feed
TIED here for 2 reasons...

Thought BOTH had nice crisp wording/flow AND clever metaphor/wordplays/GUNplays,rather...

EVEN IF I comprehended MV's final flip this might still be a cop-out tie w/ my (relative) inexperience in voting 1-2s.
It's just that close to me.
I GET everything 'til the 6 ft, 2 rings ending.
Spree told me Google would help, but it did not, in this case.
That said,
we all (I hope) love the word Djinn...just a gr8 phonetic. word. perhaps a play on his "demon" avatar...
Purists/nerdy topicalists COULD argue the gunfire @ end of opener "brngg brngg" is slightly "lazy"?...but I'd Disagree...this is battle 1-2s and it rhymes w/ Djinn and it's onomatopia gunfire, even if slightly corny...So it works to me...

Thought Mac had a really nice creative gunbar/writing-brag/stock market flip...even better if MV is known to trade...good flow.
But MV's was - to me - pretty original & a really slick phonetic 1-2 punch.
That's why I can't call it and will let others go next...REGARDLESS of my density on not getting MV's ending

GL next week to both.
If not many votes this week and Spree allows, I'd come back to this link and pick1 out of a hat, or re-re-read.

MV got it with the Illmac tie-in here, even if he’s the last person I would describe as 6ft haha! The line was good conceptually

I get what Mac was going for with the pump and dump idea, just didn’t feel it came off as well as he had hoped this week. Nice idea, just not quite there. It probably didn’t need the word ‘scheme’ following pump and dump, may perhaps have been stronger without it in truth

Mac's pump & dump scheme was OK, up against an on form MV this week though. The Djinn / Jin ill mac bar was dope and was obviously more tailored to Mac so I got MV taking this.

Vote MV

This is hard to call not cuz they both are fire but because
They both have they wrongs equally IMO.
I WAS leaning towards MV but then again the personal woulda been a haymaker if he was a real battle rapper or even illmac himself Mac had a decent jab and I think it was decent enough to edge my Vote here

Vote - Mac

I'll be for real, I have no clue wtf MV was talking about like at all. I thought he was using Illmatic or something but that dudes still alive and shit. So not sure where the hell his bar is going. Mac's bar wasn't amazing but I like the stock market concept. It's probably played around some circles but fuck them cos I wasn't around all that.

v/Mac

Seen Illmac done on Mac. Wasn’t a fan of this angle. Tbh I thought Mac’s bar was fire. Worded better to

V/mac

MV's was all over the place
And the np is old. As is the wp

Vgt mac's simple, somewhat effective throwaway

Depends what u like
All the wps was a bit much for me tbh
Simple enough line from mac but it flowed better and hit harder imo

Again depends what u like

Vote mac

Mac wins