WK 6: Erica Da Baddie Vs Slayerr - Slayerr Wins Open For Feedback

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@Erica Baddie
@Slayerr.

Ufc calibre left hook, put her out and bury her like maddie
How are you the baddie? When your face is fatter than an out of camp paddy

@Erica Baddie
This post needs your bar, tonight madam

Slayerr Wins by no show

UFC mention in the set up links with the Paddy Pimblett punch ok but the Maddie reference in between sends it off track a bit.
The thing I'm not keen on with the comparison in the punch is that "fat" means the same in both scenarios IE fat face & fat paddy. This kind of bar works better with a double meaning. Just to give an example of what I mean: Since you're English you'll know the sayings "blacker than the fire back" & "more chins than a Chinese phone book" - black has the same meaning in both contexts which is the colour, similar to how your bar was. Chin means the body part in one context and a surname in the other. I'm guessing the human brain's reward pathways are somehow stimulated by 2 separate things becoming logically linked, which would explain why wordplay doesn't hit the same when it's been heard before as the 2 meanings would already have been linked by the brain. I'd like to say how I think the brain has evolved to be like this but I appreciate you've probably already got bored so I'll stop.

This guy thinks waaay too hard about bars man. This was a nice punch