WK 4:Bahriman Vs Spectre1 - Bah wins

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What da fucc is a Bahriman, I spit that shit Pac be on
ya wordplay str8 outta Pokemon, nerd lines like u in front of Comic-Con

I’d let the Mac squeak! But blades have this fag bleed
Put something Sharp on ya body, & I ain’t talm bout your loss from last week

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I’d let the Mac squeak! But blades have this fag bleed
Put something Sharp on ya body, & I ain’t talm bout your loss last week

Spitacular1 had the dope hard hitting personal

Bahrmaiden had the simplest most statement blah bland bar I've ever seen... absolute boring dog shit


Spitacular1 wins and it's good to see Jo back battling

Spectre
Nerd lines/comic con was ok. Seems really dated but the flow of the 1 2 was nice
Bahriman didnt really do much with his bar.

Spec made little to no sense
And what he was going for was whack

Bah had the personal
Simple, mediocre, but more than enough

Bahri wins

Spectre started with a question I would also like to know the answer to; what is a Bahriman? You should have followed on from this but went with an unrelated non-attacking statement with no wordplay IE the Tupac line. The Pokémon thing didn't serve much of a purpose in terms of building up to the finale but you at least had a simile that worked with the comic-con/nerd lines idea. I think you had the nerd lines thing in mind then didn't think too much about the rest which has resulted in 4 separate parts which aren't working together. I think you'll have more success if you focus on making it less scattered & more unified.

Bahriman made the punch more relevant to his opponent. Not sure why you shortened talking bout to talm bout. I think you could've used some more creative sharp wordplay but it was enough to win.

Vote Bahriman

Spec

you must be a like audio battler rapper ...or something because what you said is a statement. It's not even a punch....we could be considered nerds too anyways bro we literally on a forum typing raps to each other lmao. The simile is okay though, but doesn't do any damage really


Bah

Idk man I kinda dislike bars talking about their last opponent in a 1-2 punch league unless it's super dope to the point we have to give you kudos for it. I think was just not that great in this case...but it was pertaining to your opponent more.

I don't know man, the audio side of me is leaning toward spec with this one only for the fact that it would sound better if you said it out loud....Bahr did have more potential for his punch though, I think it hit harder because it was more of a personal jab woulda liked a nameplay or something to tie it in more though.

V- Bahriman

3-2 need more votes

v/Bahri

Comic-con line was ok it just didnt hit very hard imo, but extra points for rhyming Bahriman. NP/Personal from Bahri was enough to lock this one in imo.

spectre's bar was really bland. although much better than his previous weeks bars.. definitely improving there. bahriman was also pretty basic but it landed and it included my name on it so I got him here.. jk.. it was more solid

Bahriman wins