Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Ex wins

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday and will be open until Wednesday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Fresh @EXalted

Check. Let's go 10

Coool. 1o it is

Ext. Please

i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch

u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Exalted.

i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
I get the personal you were going for but this whiffed for me execution wise.
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
THis was a decent jab
Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
A tad forced, not the best honestly
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
This was fire.
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
Decent jab w/ the personal

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Fresh

u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
Thjs was a decent jab.
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
Not sure about the rhyme scheme. Punch is solid.
bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
This was okay. Kinda light.
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
Solid jab
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
Solid set up. Good jab

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Close battle. I liked alot from both, Ex had the LotB, but Fresh was more consistent.

Vote - Fresh

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Exalted.

i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
Not really feeling this one
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
Not bad
Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
The concept isn’t bad but it isn’t a hard hit IMO
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
Not bad on this one either
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
Cool closer

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Vs

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Fresh

u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
Sorry not feeling this one
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
This one feels basic
bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
Light jab
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
Not bad
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
Solid closer

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Not a bad match overall but I have fresh coming a bit stronger overall, about even on quality though and both had two solid bars

V/ Fresh

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Exalted.

i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
Good personal and wp concept. I had to reread to get it which took some impact. I like the ‘if he lose it HE LOSE IT’ play too
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
Pretty good. Self nameplays/personals are never big hitters for me but this was cool
Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
Props for the attempt at creativity but… Nah this is a miss for me. “I treated her ass like a simple carb & ate it” is just not something I can imagine anyone saying ever
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
Boom. Big punch. Good execution. Lotb here
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
[b]Cool np idea but I’m not clear about what you’re going for with ‘off the heels’ on the literal side of it.

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Fresh

u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
OK. I’ve done a pilfer line before
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
Cool attack bar
bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
Nah that’s a REALLY old and used wordplay. Too simple to compensate
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
cool.
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
concept is cool. Execution I think could have been a little cleaner but not bad

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In general, Fresh had simpler concepts but executed them better than Ex did his more ambitious concepts. In that sense it’s close and will just come down to voter preference. For me, Ex had the LOTB, and what’s sealed my vote is that he took a few personal angles, whereas Fresh was more generic.

V/ Ex

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth


Vs


u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks

I’ve seen Radar done to death here and NC


I got this tied in quotes but I’m edging it to Ex for two reason. He had line of the battle and he had more personals

V/exalted

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
not feelin this punch
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
nice wording a lookin choppy but i dig it
Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
nah mad basic
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
ehh could of been dope but basic
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
LOL!!!! FUEGO!!!



vs



u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
nice
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
ehhh weak jab
bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
super old flip
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
lite again
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
could of been flame but set up hurt you here.


Lite battle overall. Ex finished it off with a dope personal/np/wp flip. Fresh started off wit a haymaker but the rest was made plain. a couple more creative bars would of get the job done.

v. Exalted

3-2 Need votes from:

@plethora @Cody Nash @R!canTheoryz @Zunto @Bahriman

If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
-nah
Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
-not a fan of self np bars unless opponents name is tied in
Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
-lol nice
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
-concept was fire but execution was not
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
-dope

Vs.

don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
-eh
ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
-close to a miss
bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
-no
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
-lol simple but I fux wit it
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
-ok


Nothing really hit hard for fresh while exalted had a haymaker. However I'm going with consistency..


V-fresh

Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch

vs

u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map

So I have it even in quotes here but I actually think that Ex had the stronger ones. I really like Fresh’s Pilfer line but as far as the other 2, they’re cool but not as strong as the 3 I quoted from Ex. The habitat light is LOTB for me.

v/Ex

4-3 exalted wins