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@mv
@spectre1
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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@mv
@spectre1
in. probably dropping early
everybody is getting raped since yall wanna make barc leave
my dick in your butt or ill get the pump thats how im bringin him pressure
gauge a dapper dentist...police'll be measuring a fresh cavity inspectre
internet rapper - keep typing, see me on lennox ave wit a pen & pad
MV u not a "demon" u a fuccen "daemon" linux app
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internet rapper - keep typing, see me on lenox ave wit a pen & pad
MV u not a "demon" u a fuccen "daemon" linux app
my dick in your butt or ill get the pump thats how im bringin him pressure
gauge a dapper dentist...police'll be measuring a fresh cavity inspectre
"gauge a dapper dentist"..???!!!.."fresh cavity inspect"...???!!!
rhis made no sense... i dont know what else to say
internet rapper - keep typing, see me on lenox ave wit a pen & pad
MV u not a "demon" u a fuccen "daemon" linux app
this is somewhat over my head(maybe the wording) but at least you attempted a punch and the concept was fresher though could use work
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vote spectre1
Bizarre first line, could have actually been decent wit some better set up you threw away the first line with some weird shit....but you do you broski. the potential was there though for it to be good for sure.Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
I don't like the wording here much for the punch....I mean I know everyone likes the shorter lines here but I think the execution for the daemon linux app could have been worded a little different for a stronger effect personally.Quote:
Originally Posted by spectre1
I'll Vote Spec....MV kinda trolled away with the first line lol.
MV's rape approach was bold & reckless. I'm not too keen on the dentist part, assuming the fresh cavity resulted from the aforementioned rape I'm not sure it was necessary. cavity in spectre idea was good.
Spectre had some pretty basic wordplay. Think it could've been decent but calling someone a dodgy Linux app didn't do it for me.
Vote MV
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i got mv all the way here. Spectre was basic with the "you're not, you're a" approach.. mv was a bit weird but lol it kind of made sense to me.. I don't think calling someone a daemon is a diss at all
vote MV
Vote MV
MV's bar was pause-worthy, but I will say that it was atleast creative and set up well enough. Spectre, you kind of fumbled a golden opportunity here. A decent jab would have edged this, but there just wasnt enough here. The flip felt lazy, and the usertitle tie into your opponent is a stretch at best. Just kinda underwhelming.
3-2 MV