Wk 14 Mal Diction 2-6 vs Fitzgerald 0-0-Fitzerald Wins

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@mal diction @Fitzgerald

Checkin

little shit ur gettin crippled in this fight, got the tre poppin and its triple hits tonight
launching missiles w/this snipe- give yall a show when mal come in the middle of the sights

i actually signed out this week

... i'll see what i can do

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I’m a man of convictions and my road it gets narrow
You’re gay. A man of dimensions, But i guess it fits, Gerald

Gonna go with the shithead Alia’s in this one

Vote fitz

loving the mal com flip, think it could have been a bit better connection wise but the concept is fire

mal actually came solid here, i like the man of dimensions/it fits connection & overall it was solid

slight edge to fitz cuz i liked the concept more but this was genuinely close and wouldn't be shocked if votes go both ways

v/ fitz

fitz had the better bar. i liked his malcom in the middle of the sights that was nice.

mal i get what you were going for but it was basically a decently worded, horrible concept.

v/ fitz

Vote- Fitz. Mal had a cute swing didn’t do much tho

I caught the narrow/dimensions/fits theme but the connection from "you're gay" to "man of dimensions" wasn't there for me unless I missed something. Props for not no-showing despite the sign out.
The give y'all a show/Malcolm in the middle wordplay was decent, set up was longer than necessary to make the punch work but flowed ok & was enough to win convincingly.

Vote Fitzgerald

v/Fitz

with that being said this was close. i read over the bars again today. mal you had a lot of good things going on in your bar . word association , antonyms but i have fitz here with just a little more heft to his punch. Fitz left a breadcrumb or two leading to the punch. and Malcome in the middle was a solid show. good showing here from both

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6-0 Fitzerald Wins