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PIC BATTLE (OPTIONAL)
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IF I WAKE UP FRIDAY MORNING AND YOU DIDNT POST A VERSE OR REQUEST.. YOU LOSE
@Bahriman @KnoXville.
Check. 4
Pics?
Confidence can take u places. & honestly all My plugs are wealthy,
This bitch Ignored my pic battle request only cuz he’s way to ugly for a selfie.
You’ll catch me swimming in island waters same color as fountain blue,
So if we ever see ‘bah ja with a blast’ it’s only cuz this pussy is addicted to Mountain Dew.
At my quickest glance you dnt burst 9s with them hurt lines,
I Got enough punches that’ll hit RI play so bad voters gonna forget to catch it the first Time.
This Faggit is up to his neck in a pool of lies,
Never gets pussy so I’m trying to let Balsy; Cuz that’s exactly how he acts when he’s in a room full of guys.
Bahs verse
Knox small in this lake & this Glock is soakin
No fishin - I pull out the stick & a pole till they find your body floatin
Your wife give me sloppy grill cos you broke & just not IT
Ruin the family @ Knockwurst, by going to his crib n feed her sausage
Dnt need the eagle cus this chump so fuckin wack
Success? You won’t Gainwell..
Have your body feelin more snaps than that running back
You one of them text clowns just ain’t known for mentions
Your involvement in a “Spazzing Bar” is exactly that after you vote against him
Confidence can take u places. & honestly all My plugs are wealthy,
This bitch Ignored my pic battle request only cuz he’s way to ugly for a selfie.
basic but straight. The psuedo multi kinda detracted from the punch. Normally wouldn’t matter, but the punch was already light
You’ll catch me swimming in island waters same color as fountain blue,
So if we ever see ‘bah ja with a blast’ it’s only cuz this pussy is addicted to Mountain Dew.
Ehh, so-so, unless I’m not getting something
At my quickest glance you dnt burst 9s with them hurt lines,
I Got enough punches that’ll hit RI play so bad voters gonna forget to catch it the first Time.
Not a huge fan of picking a random syllable of someone’s name to flip. Unless people actually call him “RI”, which I haven’t seen
This Faggit is up to his neck in a pool of lies,
Never gets pussy so I’m trying to let Balsy; Cuz that’s exactly how he acts when he’s in a room full of guys.
Ball-see/ballsy? Who’s Ball? Is it supposed to be “bol” like “young bol”? Idk man
Knox small in this lake & this Glock is soakin
No fishin - I pull out the stick & a pole till they find your body floatin
“Glock is soakin” is sort of weird wording. Stick/pole puns are kinda basic, but it’s tight over all.
Your wife give me sloppy grill cos you broke & just not IT
Ruin the family @ Knockwurst, by going to his crib n feed her sausage
Kinda cheesy, but it’s solid. “Sloppy grill” was a decent concept that probably could’ve been used a bit more effectively
Dnt need the eagle cus this chump so fuckin wack
Success? You won’t Gainwell..
Have your body feelin more snaps than that running back
Simplistic, but effective. “That” running back lowkey takes something off the punch/messes with the flow imo. Could’ve slightly reworded
You one of them text clowns just ain’t known for mentions
Your involvement in a “Spazzing Bar” is exactly that after you vote against him
I feel like this is referencing something idk about
Knoxville was kinda light here, seems like maybe he was uninspired/rushing to get something posted. Bahr was cool, and did enough to get the win based on better punches, slightly better flow, better concepts, etc
BRB. I’m getting ready to type a barcotic wall of text crying why that vote doesn’t count lol.
Bahr
Knox small in this lake & this Glock is soakin
No fishin - I pull out the stick & a pole till they find your body floatin
ok simple bar here. 2/5 you could have been more creative with this i have seen your punches.
Your wife give me sloppy grill cos you broke & just not IT
Ruin the family @ Knockwurst, by going to his crib n feed her sausage
the flow was off here and concept of the name play is good. 3/5 would be higher but that off rhyme hurt this bar imo
Dnt need the eagle cus this chump so fuckin wack
Success? You won’t Gainwell..
Have your body feelin more snaps than that running back
3.5/5 i liked this bar. i didnt like the set up tho.
You one of them text clowns just ain’t known for mentions
Your involvement in a “Spazzing Bar” is exactly that after you vote against him
good concept but you should have saved it for barcotic as i feel the diss was attacking bar not Knox.if you could have attacked knox this could have been a solid punch 0/5
8.5/20
vs
Knox
Confidence can take u places. & honestly all My plugs are wealthy,
This bitch Ignored my pic battle request only cuz he’s way to ugly for a selfie.
nothing flashy here just calling the man plain ugly with a personal 2.5/5. this was a prime opportunity for a nice lil wp or np to give it that extra umppff.
You’ll catch me swimming in island waters same color as fountain blue,
So if we ever see ‘bah ja with a blast’ it’s only cuz this pussy is addicted to Mountain Dew.
nice concept but the wordplay/nameplay comes off forced. still gave me a chuckle. 2.5
At my quickest glance you dnt burst 9s with them hurt lines,
I Got enough punches that’ll hit RI play so bad voters gonna forget to catch it the first Time.
I Bahri was called RI this would be dope. as it i cant let it go bro. 1/5
This Faggit is up to his neck in a pool of lies,
Never gets pussy so I’m trying to let Balsy; Cuz that’s exactly how he acts when he’s in a room full of guys.
ok now i feel like this was a rushed verse. the concepts are all here but they need polishing. Balsy/Bah See phonetically is a reach. 2/5
8/20
v/Bahri
This was a close one. i have Bahri pulling ahead in points. this could go either way but i feel if Knox's wording was more polished this would have done the other way. good stuff gents
Tough battle
Both had great opener
Both Punchlines decent
Both flow tight
Vote- Bahirman
Guessing Erica Baddie is another members manifestation of a need for attention based on the parody-like content & repetitive nature of their posts.
Knox - first bar was alright, basic but benefitted from the of-the-moment factor. The RI play line was decent. The closer wasn't quite there for me, may be a cultural terminology thing but in the UK "ballsy" means brave, plus the name flip itself is a bit iffy. Most of the set ups were there just to provide something for the punch to rhyme with rather than working to create framework for the punch or to build up to it, but there were a couple of nice bars in there.
Bahriman - The first bar was going well but I've not seen anyone completing the act of pole fishing by having the fish's body floating so a bit unsure on that one. Knackwurst bar was aight. Missed the Gainwell reference unfortunately. Closer was of the moment and nicely done, props.
The difference for me came down to Bah having the elements of each 1-2 tied together in a better fashion & also landing punches a little cleaner throughout then closing off with arguably the best bar of the battle.
Vote Bahriman
Bah wins