Aight nice shit some nice multies but sometimes they were forced....you had a good aprroch.and at the end had a nice twist...some lines were off.but most of it was good well done.
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Aight nice shit some nice multies but sometimes they were forced....you had a good aprroch.and at the end had a nice twist...some lines were off.but most of it was good well done.
Very good imagery in this. I could see it all happening. Also good voice. I could hear everything going on. Also nice vocabulary and nice flow. Everything went well in it. No flaws in this. Very nice for a first OM... Bravo!
thats some hannible lector type shit right their fits in wit ur name perfectly dope good jobQuote:
Originally Posted by -Twizted-
One word Sick.............................I cant say no more wat the fuck is goin on in ya noogin that was some sick shit but creative 2 thumbs up fuck struc
wuz poetic but it wuz disturbin for real. came wit the mutis,flow,wordplay, and waz very creative. disturbin imagery but it wuz cool like i said but story line was put together well...Good shit keep flowin..
Damn Twizted...That was hot...It was weird by what u was talkin bout..But that was good..
Its like i could picture it in my head..Mad props to You..Keep doin what u do
~~Peace~~
that was some of that next level, brotha lynch, Tech n9ne, eminem typa shit.
that's why i liked it it was outside the box and twisted.live up 2 ya name.it kept me interested in what the ending was gonna be.
Wow, That is Amazing The sickest mind yet in the most cleverest way, It Shows a Gaint Symbol For love, If I could put love in the sickest diffenation this would be it, Never Have I seen something like this, I like it to the max. Keep it up
it was very moving, interesting, and crazy.
i like the wording you chose, and the topic went great withyour flow.
all i could add is, Dope.
love it!not tryin to be gay or nothin but i love it! that was hot....i really can't tell u what to elevate on...cuase everything was perfect....
thats called sick dropp.......that was off the chian that was a good freestyle
Homie you crazy as hell lmao...........this shit was dope.......kinda poetic ya kno
i like how you told it storywise imagry was on point to me and vocab was decent
shit was crazy how you ate her.......... so you can be beatiful on the inside that last
line was intrigue'n the whole piece was good.........you showed emotion and everything
damn good shit homie..........damn im babblin lmao 9/10 1 off cuz of structure and organization everything else was fuck'n twizted
I agree with Malice.
But let me add something. For a dope textcee, you came through with the dopeness in an Open Mic. Give you major props for this piece, due to the fact that I enjoyed the emotion and pictured the imagery in my cranium. <
That Was TighT..NiCe Verse...Well not even that..It was a Nice storyline. Very Creative. Flow and rythm was good. Very well structured. Cant Nobody touch that. Umm by the way..I need a poem for this girl. lol
Keep it up..
yo dawg that was real hood homie keep that killa kali flow goin
keep spittin dat real shit and smashin on these dum fuckas
OMG! this shit was crazy
at first i was like you twizted psycho, there's no way in hell this piece will be a good read or w/e
but damn, the imagery in the OM was crazy
very storylike, at some times you prolly coulda used different vocab like instead of sayin "finger her cold pussy" lol
but yea, this was a nice drop, kinda poetic but kinda audio
only problem i saw was that some of the lines were a lil stretched but even then the flow didn't fall off
good emotion and everything, nice topic as well.....not somethin i coulda did but you pulled it off nicely, good job
i still say your a twizted fuck though, i guess that why your name's twizted lol
9.9/10 keep writin