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@3viction
@Fresh
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Fresh is good to go. He sent his verse in (16).
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Originally Posted by Fresh
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Originally Posted by Fresh
Don’t get your knickers in a twist, cuz you’ll stay at the bottom, until I update the eviction list.
Blank page? I can fix it quick because after this battle it’ll be filled with reasons to slit your wrist.
I call my own shots, ur a punk for war, I’ll kick a nobodies ass, sometimes that’s a fucking chore
They asked if you wanted to battle Dia..
U said, sup of course, I’m not saying I’m never in battles with fat scrubs, but you’re justin moore
Clinging on this shit and calling me irrelevant, when ur skeleton will be here after the ball of flames.
Ur opinion means nothing, worse than soule thinking he’s decorated enough to influence hall of fames.
You’re a cancer with no lyrical styles, trying to alienate the tall whites, but you lack n miracle aisles.
Light weights can only handle one bar, and doing the minimal aint a cure to crutch like clinical trials.
This fucking battle scene is stuck in wasted art, fresh meat get hof when did this fluctuation start.
Fresh has a broken home, tore that fuckin place a part, he can damn sure cap but forgets the punctuation mark.
Never a bold statement, this old faggit came back from hiatus w/ the style of a new arrival.
Ls is what I’ll hand out first cuz fresh has no stand out verse even if dagel updated his user title
He’s a broken record I left him behind. I had bitches that like to play with the stick too I kept ‘em inside.
You bring your bitch out I’ll catch her throwing spears because of the machetes pressed in my eye.
Fresh dope? If you heard that it’s like your played concepts I’m wondering what left of ya ear…
Cuz u beat ‘em to death believing that shit, then refresh to spam us with those dumps the rest of the year.
Pacifist through his face, n I won’t be high when I’m doing it
One hit and his Acid Drop faster than the entire Hippie movement did
You get 0 recognition; if you’re on the MAP s’cos u like em six and not olderQuote:
Originally Posted by miracle
It’s crazy; if he sees a kid that’s All Dressed he instantly gets a chip on his shoulder
I’ve faced adversity n won. until its pointed at u, u’ve never felt the weight of a gun
I bet he’s gone against all odds too… because every girl he’s been with is rated a one
A peculiar looking man, the umbilical cord was early to get severed
If laughter is the best medicine, everyone who’s seen you is sure to live forever
I’ll fuck you up any time of day, drink a coffee then face a bitchQuote:
Originally Posted by 3viction
fuck a deep wound… the Couple Fuse to your head like a fuckin angler fish
your health’s on a slope, u suck at battling + you’re affected by strokesQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
for every person diabetes lost 10 times the amount if we’re mentioning hopes
Don’t take the obese jokes to heart, mixed with the trans-fat it won’t be takin’ em
And when I say “you’re a good sport” I don’t mean because you can fill up a stadium
I’ll make you say uncle, for you this is a hopeless fight
The way I keep the ante up, you’d think that it was poker night
I’m almost hesitant to vote on this battle cuz I don’t want no one bitching about votes
Eviction-
Opener was alright.. decent start
Justin Moore was stretched as fuck n worst as hell.. u could have used like 15 less words in that bar.. hall of fame was ok.. not much of a diss to fresh but okish..
The rest just wasn’t anything worth mentioning… another dagel line.. and some really wordy bars.. little to stretched for my taste and honestly the concepts weren’t there
Fresh-
I wasn’t feeling much in ur verse either.. and I think after reading dias verse it made me tired n not wanna read ur verse.. the only things that stood out for me was diabetes and stadium.. rest was meh
Overall this comes down to 2bars vs 2bars… dias opener and hall of fame bar vs fresh s diabetes n stadium bar
Weak battle and I’m pissed I read it.. specially it being 16 lines.. imma give it to fresh for the odd bar being almost ok
Vote fresh
Couple fuse was alright too
I Apologize … I re read this battle and it wasn’t as bad as I previously stated… vote stays the same but better than I said before
Don’t get your knickers in a twist, cuz you’ll stay at the bottom, until I update the eviction list.
Blank page? I can fix it quick because after this battle it’ll be filled with reasons to slit your wrist.
This was slick
I call my own shots, ur a punk for war, I’ll kick a nobodies ass, sometimes that’s a fucking chore
They asked if you wanted to battle Dia..
U said, sup of course, I’m not saying I’m never in battles with fat scrubs, but you’re justin moore
Nah
Clinging on this shit and calling me irrelevant, when ur skeleton will be here after the ball of flames.
Ur opinion means nothing, worse than soule thinking he’s decorated enough to influence hall of fames.
lol not bad
You’re a cancer with no lyrical styles, trying to alienate the tall whites, but you lack n miracle aisles.
Light weights can only handle one bar, and doing the minimal aint a cure to crutch like clinical trials.
Wasn’t a fan of the wording on this
This fucking battle scene is stuck in wasted art, fresh meat get hof when did this fluctuation start.
Fresh has a broken home, tore that fuckin place a part, he can damn sure cap but forgets the punctuation mark.
Nah
Never a bold statement, this old faggit came back from hiatus w/ the style of a new arrival.
Ls is what I’ll hand out first cuz fresh has no stand out verse even if dagel updated his user title
Didn’t need more than 1 dagel diss. Are you battling fresh or dagel? Lol
He’s a broken record I left him behind. I had bitches that like to play with the stick too I kept ‘em inside.
You bring your bitch out I’ll catch her throwing spears because of the machetes pressed in my eye.
Nah bro
Fresh dope? If you heard that it’s like your played concepts I’m wondering what left of ya ear…
Cuz u beat ‘em to death believing that shit, then refresh to spam us with those dumps the rest of the year
Not a fan of this
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Pacifist through his face, n I won’t be high when I’m doing it
One hit and his Acid Drop faster than the entire Hippie movement did
This was decent opener
You get 0 recognition; if you’re on the MAP s’cos u like em six and not older
It’s crazy; if he sees a kid that’s All Dressed he instantly gets a chip on his shoulder
Lmao not bad. More funny than it was good. Still a hit
I’ve faced adversity n won. until its pointed at u, u’ve never felt the weight of a gun
I bet he’s gone against all odds too… because every girl he’s been with is rated a one
Not a fan of this, saw what you were going for tho
A peculiar looking man, the umbilical cord was early to get severed
If laughter is the best medicine, everyone who’s seen you is sure to live forever
Fire lol
I’ll fuck you up any time of day, drink a coffee then face a bitch
fuck a deep wound… the Couple Fuse to your head like a fuckin angler fish
Nice this was cool
your health’s on a slope, u suck at battling + you’re affected by strokes
for every person diabetes lost 10 times the amount if we’re mentioning hopes
Mentioning hopes? Nah
Don’t take the obese jokes to heart, mixed with the trans-fat it won’t be takin’ em
And when I say “you’re a good sport” I don’t mean because you can fill up a stadium
Worded weird but this was funny
I’ll make you say uncle, for you this is a hopeless fight
The way I keep the ante up, you’d think that it was poker night
Nah filler
Disagree with miracle saying this was a shit battle. I thought fresh verse was solid. I was holding out hope that dia verse was gonna be the same based off his opener but he quickly went downhill after that unfortunately.
v/ fresh
3Viction
Don’t get your knickers in a twist, cuz you’ll stay at the bottom, until I update the eviction list.
Blank page? I can fix it quick because after this battle it’ll be filled with reasons to slit your wrist.
I LIKED THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE
I call my own shots, ur a punk for war, I’ll kick a nobodies ass, sometimes that’s a fucking chore
They asked if you wanted to battle Dia..
U said, sup of course, I’m not saying I’m never in battles with fat scrubs, but you’re justin more
what about justin more? I'm missing something on this punch its not or its just not for me.
Clinging on this shit and calling me irrelevant, when ur skeleton will be here after the ball of flames.
Ur opinion means nothing, worse than soule thinking he’s decorated enough to influence hall of fame.
eh. i like the attitude and the bar is good but i feel its more of a slight towards Soule.
You’re a cancer with no lyrical styles, trying to alienate the tall whites, but you lack n miracle aisles.
Light weights can only handle one bar, and doing the minimal aint a cure to crutch like clinical trials.
not sure where this bar was going bro.
This fucking battle scene is stuck in wasted art, fresh meat get hof when did this fluctuation start.
Fresh has a broken home, tore that fuckin place a part, he can damn sure cap but forgets the punctuation mark.
rhyme scheme was good, felt forced to start tho. i think this could have been dope with a better set up. as is i am not feeling it.
Never a bold statement, this old faggit came back from hiatus w/ the style of a new arrival.
Ls is what I’ll hand out first cuz fresh has no stand out verse even if dagel updated his user title
naw bro. you need to focus on Fresh more
He’s a broken record I left him behind. I had bitches that like to play with the stick too I kept ‘em inside.
You bring your bitch out I’ll catch her throwing spears because of the machetes pressed in my eye.
i wasn't feeling this one
Fresh dope? If you heard that it’s like your played concepts I’m wondering what left of ya ear…
Cuz u beat ‘em to death believing that shit, then refresh to spam us with those dumps the rest of the year.
not so sure about the wording but the concept i thought was fire
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Fresh
Pacifist through his face, n I won’t be high when I’m doing it
One hit and his Acid Drop faster than the entire Hippie movement did
not really feeling this one
You get 0 recognition; if you’re on the MAP s’cos u like em six and not older
It’s crazy; if he sees a kid that’s All Dressed he instantly gets a chip on his shoulder
lol tf
I’ve faced adversity n won. until its pointed at u, u’ve never felt the weight of a gun
I bet he’s gone against all odds too… because every girl he’s been with is rated a one
this was good
A peculiar looking man, the umbilical cord was early to get severed
If laughter is the best medicine, everyone who’s seen you is sure to live forever
lol feel a bit dated but still funny
I’ll fuck you up any time of day, drink a coffee then face a bitch
fuck a deep wound… the Couple Fuse to your head like a fuckin angler fish
you no fair fighting motherfkr. good visual except the angler fish has one light on hits head.
your health’s on a slope, u suck at battling + you’re affected by strokes
for every person diabetes lost 10 times the amount if we’re mentioning hopes
ok this is what i mean about fat jokes. that gotta be MEANNNN or real funny and this is indeed mean
Don’t take the obese jokes to heart, mixed with the trans-fat it won’t be takin’ em
And when I say “you’re a good sport” I don’t mean because you can fill up a stadium
ok
I’ll make you say uncle, for you this is a hopeless fight
The way I keep the ante up, you’d think that it was poker night
wasn't feeling this one
i have fresh taking this one with a stronger performance. his misses were a bit more in line with what i would except from a punch that i didnt like but i could see where he was going with that attempt. good read appreciate the work gentlemen.
v/Fresh
Don’t get your knickers in a twist, cuz you’ll stay at the bottom, until I update the eviction list.
Blank page? I can fix it quick because after this battle it’ll be filled with reasons to slit your wrist.
I call my own shots, ur a punk for war, I’ll kick a nobodies ass, sometimes that’s a fucking chore
They asked if you wanted to battle Dia..
U said, sup of course, I’m not saying I’m never in battles with fat scrubs, but you’re justin moore
I had to google Justin moore fat , if this is the guy who lost all the weight , this is actually pretty cool lol if not then idk tf your talking about
Vs
I’ve faced adversity n won. until its pointed at u, u’ve never felt the weight of a gun
I bet he’s gone against all odds too… because every girl he’s been with is rated a one
A peculiar looking man, the umbilical cord was early to get severed
If laughter is the best medicine, everyone who’s seen you is sure to live forever
your health’s on a slope, u suck at battling + you’re affected by strokes
for every person diabetes lost 10 times the amount if we’re mentioning hopes
Alright I got fresh here for just the better overal verse .. I didn’t mind the double dagel bars in evictions verse I just think that they could have been more directed and aimed towards fresh . Also think you got caught up in rhyme schemes instead of setting up your punches better.. not a bad read though I did think you had some cool concepts . I think fresh verse was just more polished , the diabetes line. Was the bar of the battle, thought that word play was dope , wishhhh he would have finished it better but it was still cool .. , couple lines read a bit wordy but, I think he had enough to pull it out
Vote fresh ( if shits out of order my bad copying and pasting from my phone )
lol that wasn't about justin moore, just in more jesus
i'm basically saying I call my own shots and he battles nobodies, I acknowledged I'm in battles with nobodies also but he's just in more.
fresh wins tho
Don’t get your knickers in a twist, cuz you’ll stay at the bottom, until I update the eviction list.
Blank page? I can fix it quick because after this battle it’ll be filled with reasons to slit your wrist.
Nice rhyme scheme. A little statementish but I didn't think it was all that bad.
I call my own shots, ur a punk for war, I’ll kick a nobodies ass, sometimes that’s a fucking chore
They asked if you wanted to battle Dia..
U said, sup of course, I’m not saying I’m never in battles with fat scrubs, but you’re justin moore
Nice delivery. A little wordy but I didn't think it was all that bad.
Clinging on this shit and calling me irrelevant, when ur skeleton will be here after the ball of flames.
Ur opinion means nothing, worse than soule thinking he’s decorated enough to influence hall of fames.
Nice Personal. This was a great punch.
You’re a cancer with no lyrical styles, trying to alienate the tall whites, but you lack n miracle aisles.
Light weights can only handle one bar, and doing the minimal aint a cure to crutch like clinical trials.
Nice misdirect. A little confusing but I didn't think it was all that bad.
This fucking battle scene is stuck in wasted art, fresh meat get hof when did this fluctuation start.
Fresh has a broken home, tore that fuckin place a part, he can damn sure cap but forgets the punctuation mark.
Punctuation mark. Damn that's crazy.
Never a bold statement, this old faggit came back from hiatus w/ the style of a new arrival.
Ls is what I’ll hand out first cuz fresh has no stand out verse even if dagel updated his user title
Nice internals. A little overcomplicated but I didn't think it was all that bad.
He’s a broken record I left him behind. I had bitches that like to play with the stick too I kept ‘em inside.
You bring your bitch out I’ll catch her throwing spears because of the machetes pressed in my eye.
Machetes. Damn that's crazy.
Fresh dope? If you heard that it’s like your played concepts I’m wondering what left of ya ear…
Cuz u beat ‘em to death believing that shit, then refresh to spam us with those dumps the rest of the year.
Nice wording. A little aggressive but I didn't think it was all that bad.
Pacifist through his face, n I won’t be high when I’m doing it
One hit and his Acid Drop faster than the entire Hippie movement did
Cool wordplay variant.
You get 0 recognition; if you’re on the MAP s’cos u like em six and not older
It’s crazy; if he sees a kid that’s All Dressed he instantly gets a chip on his shoulder
Wasn't feeling this.
I’ve faced adversity n won. until its pointed at u, u’ve never felt the weight of a gun
I bet he’s gone against all odds too… because every girl he’s been with is rated a one
Lmao.
A peculiar looking man, the umbilical cord was early to get severed
If laughter is the best medicine, everyone who’s seen you is sure to live forever
Decent cliche variant.
I’ll fuck you up any time of day, drink a coffee then face a bitch
fuck a deep wound… the Couple Fuse to your head like a fuckin angler fish
I laughed.
your health’s on a slope, u suck at battling + you’re affected by strokes
for every person diabetes lost 10 times the amount if we’re mentioning hopes
Dope nameflip. Harsh
Don’t take the obese jokes to heart, mixed with the trans-fat it won’t be takin’ em
And when I say “you’re a good sport” I don’t mean because you can fill up a stadium
Roflz. LOTB.
I’ll make you say uncle, for you this is a hopeless fight
The way I keep the ante up, you’d think that it was poker night
Wasn't feeling this.
3viction's verse wasn't really that good but I didn't think it was all that bad. Fresh just happened to have more creative punchlines and punchlines that were creative.
v-Fresh
5-0 Fresh wins