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@mv @mal diction
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Punches due Thursday
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@mv @mal diction
check
looking at Members who have read this thread ...i can see you saw this page.. so this is my noshow verse
Dead on the spot so You and your d riders can coerce
This is proof you couldn't win with me giving a noshow verse
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@MV
whoevers next this bodies a flex
so its okay to look away when he gets flayed in the goriest way
posterize the informal, in a box. ill really put this casualty on display
You think you’re bubbling but you’re not on my level
Nobodies digging your lines but quick to hit you with the shovel
https://home.howstuffworks.com/level.htm
Why did you post two bars?
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Originally Posted by Kill Spree
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Originally Posted by mal diction
Your second bar is also late.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
@mv want this open for votes or what?
yes
MV had a better attempt, mal was not only more simple somehow but did not rhyme. not too good here gentlemen.
didnt like either but mal was too statementish
v/mv
Mal had what I'm guessing is a tools/construction scheme going on, thought the bubble/level set up was good & I obviously caught the digging and shovel link, just feels like you slacked off at the end, the closing "quick to hit you with a shovel" didn't do the rest of the bar justice. Quite liked the "check" bars idea.
MV's wordplay was dope and was tailored to Mal, the set up was a bit "the rain in Spain"ish but I rated the informal/casual tee punch. Also rhymed better than shovel/level.
Vote MV
I got MV here.. but I would have directed the punch to use the word "frame" rather than box, but it was a decent attempt. I didn't really dig maldiction's bar , concept is there but it's really really simple.. shovel and dig has been used a lot before
mvg mv
Vote MV
Better bar and didn't have the audacity to question me
MV wins