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10 lines due in an hour
regular rules
consider this my check
consider this my check-mate
rap battle me now?
That’s not a gock you got you dumb cock
You just pressin the keyboard and hittin cap lock
Don’t think dat you gangsta by running your mouth
I’m bettin’ against ya even get off the couch.
You don’t got no knife, got no bomb
You still living right wit yo dad and yo mom
You dodn’t boost, cap, run or dodge,
Talk of an enterage, it’s all just a mirage,
just you at home, ain’ t got no homey
Cuz you is alone and an online phony.
i dont need much to surpass you so i guess i'll lay quick
ima fix ya eye problems but you'll still never lay sick (lasik- eye correction)
this lames ripped he aint even mastered the basics
i could lay Six(him) down if i only sprayed six(lines)
cant spray sick youre WACK but that labels probly above you
ya flows so fucked up even jesus cant love you
youre a shit stain on this game a slave to the label lame
you still think your fire its obvious your eyes havent changed theyve stayed the same
and on that note a peaceful goodbye
youre worthless nobody's even wasting their time to beef with this guy
Battle me ??
Of the top no re-writtens
10 - 20lines only
bump
Lasix -
had nothing worth quoting.
MC -
this was a dope opener,
i dont need much to surpass you so i guess i'll lay quick
ima fix ya eye problems but you'll still never lay sick
u had really no other quoteables because you kept going with the lay sick n eyes concept whhich kinda killed your verse.
Overall - Lasix, you need to take more time on your verse and try to come more creative/harder.
MC - dont over use the same concepts over an over in ur verse. gets played out. But that opener you had did enough to pull this one out.
Vote - MC
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RTF ON ANY OF MY BATTLES.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-386677.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-386196.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-386716.html
That’s not a gock you got you dumb cock
You just pressin the keyboard and hittin cap lock
Don’t think dat you gangsta by running your mouth
I’m bettin’ against ya even get off the couch.
^..no real punch...nothing else either
You don’t got no knife, got no bomb
You still living right wit yo dad and yo mom
You dodn’t boost, cap, run or dodge,
Talk of an enterage, it’s all just a mirage,
^..seem like bed nursery rhymes..wasnt feelin
just you at home, ain’ t got no homey
Cuz you is alone and an online phony.
^..blahhh
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i dont need much to surpass you so i guess i'll lay quick
ima fix ya eye problems but you'll still never lay sick (lasik- eye correction)
^..IIGHT WORDPLAY
this lames ripped he aint even mastered the basics
i could lay Six(him) down if i only sprayed six(lines)
^..EHH
cant spray sick youre WACK but that labels probly above you
ya flows so fucked up even jesus cant love you
^..BLAH
youre a shit stain on this game a slave to the label lame
you still think your fire its obvious your eyes havent changed theyve stayed the same
and on that note a peaceful goodbye
youre worthless nobody's even wasting their time to beef with this guy
^..IIGHT
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VOTE::..MC.cm
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MC.cm
i dont need much to surpass you so i guess i'll lay quick
ima fix ya eye problems but you'll still never lay sick (lasik- eye correction)
vs.
Lasix
-nothing-
Vote: MC
This was an easy vote, Lsx needs to elevate pretty much every aspect of his rhymes---
Punches, Personals, Metaphors, Multi's, Wordplay. I say start practicin'.
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Lasix-
Completley Wack im not even gonna break this verse down
Mc-
i dont need much to surpass you so i guess i'll lay quick
ima fix ya eye problems but you'll still never lay sick (lasik- eye correction)
-nice open.. you couldve done a litttle more with it but nice-
this lames ripped he aint even mastered the basics
i could lay Six(him) down if i only sprayed six(lines)
-eh-
cant spray sick youre WACK but that labels probly above you
ya flows so fucked up even jesus cant love you
-hahah-
youre a shit stain on this game a slave to the label lame
you still think your fire its obvious your eyes havent changed theyve stayed the same
-good flow but weak bars-
and on that note a peaceful goodbye
youre worthless nobody's even wasting their time to beef with this guy
-meh ok close-
Vote- Mc hands down decent verse dude... Lasik peep some of the help forums
up^
mc wins