"Robots vs Romantics"

Robots vs Romantics

Thou hath wallowed in the impotence
oh godless matrimony; thou art false!
Am I so naive to moderation, this devilship
is what I am to become? Never is thy!
To what ignorance doth thou suffer?
for the bounty of thy babes beauty is
that of a life as true as nature's own bussom.

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I pity thee to which hath borne such
a reality so obsolite, thy creation hath
suffered the absense of Eve.

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Thy heart ... hath willed thee to live, to love.

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How doth thou compare thee fool,
when to his own creation the bare fingers
of mortality hath bound thee to life?!
The fool is but apon thy eyes!

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Maybe dropping some feed on other peoples poems might entice them to feed on yours in return? And if you already tried it, you never tried it with the right people :p

Alright, let me have a go. It's extremely page based poetry, i can't imagine reading this aloud, which makes a poem alot harder for me to understand. I'm more into spoken poetry, but i'm also the only guy brave enough to have a go at this poem ;).

I liked your idea of Robots vs Romantics, although i think the concept could have been thought of a little more. The idea of code, CSS and HTML does not imply robotics to me, although i do understand it under that title when i am hit with the romantic stanzas.

If i were to a metaphorical approach to this, in order to understand it better, i think i would be more inclined to base it on conformity/rules vs freedom/will. My reason being that 'Robots' are based around rules, objects and equasions, and therefore 'Romantics' are based on the alternative: will, instinct, and feeling.

You seem to have a knowledge of code, judging by where you placed your lines spoken (by the robots?). The use of coded language instantly gives a constricting sense of rules, lines, equasions and barriers, and the placement of your words indicates anomalies - where i could prehaps believe that the 'robot' is at a contrast with possible emotions, or something that it would not usually come across.

This further shows me that the discussion, or disagreement between the two speakers (robot and lover) is over the topic of emotion.

"thy creation hath
suffered the absense of Eve.