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This my first post on this sight in like 8 years...dont wanna go into details why but im back...Heres a song with me and my homie Jay Duece...
verse 1: me
Hook: me
Verse 2: Jay Deuce
[SOUNDCLICK]9418139[/SOUNDCLICK]
People Fed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...639/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...589/index.html
I like the song. You went in on the first verse. The hook is cool. The quality on the 2nd verse could be better its too loud. And I wasnt really feelin the 2nd verse like that. Other than that dope track.
thx on the feed homie...yea duece always on some over kill type gangsta shit...If I said yo I got a concept song about payin homage to our moms he'd probably find away to cap a few people and rob a bank in his 16...but props on the feed...UPPIN
Uppin.....................................
lyrics are dope, mix on the vocal are too punched out, i can hear some noise in the background as well. Flow is dope as hell, good work. In all im feeling this.
thx for the feed UPPIN............................
ight track is playing
ight verse started
first off... vocalz sound kind muffled, or over EQ'd maybe
flow is on point tho, but i wish delivery would be stronger, to showcase the flow better... clarity can be hard cuz of the quality, but also cuz of the consistent cadence (i.e. me saying breaking up the lines wit a stronger delivery) .. the delivery gets better towards the end of the verse, but the quality starts to break down more on it
oh shit this was the hook?
ight first off i had to rewind to make sure that was the hook.. a tip.. mix the hook different
atleast dub it .... and have it have a change of pace semi ..cuz i thought it was your verse
ight 2nd kat i assume now..cuz the quality is different, and he's dubbing his vocalz panned
wait i think
wait... wow this song was sloppy on the put together.. maybe that was the hook.. i cudn't tell lol.. yea this shit just kind of ran together
U need to get the engineering part down... to cearly pin point verses from hooks.. specially with melodies in a hook atleast
the spitting aspect was good, on the few parts i made my points on..
otherwise just the engineering was the biggest down fall
keep grinding
thx on the feed mane...yea quality is something I still havent perfected and im glad u called me on it...makes me wanna try harder when im mixin and try new techniques...props tho on takin time out...
The file kept having an error for me :(
Who were you when you were here years ago, did you have a different alias? Because I just recently started posting again after years and years and years, just curious if i'd recognize you.
yea the soundclick admin deleted one of my accounts so I gotta transfer my songs...but yea i was here like 8 years ago when I was a textcee and got banned for something i forgot but then i stay banned for like 8 years then i decided to just try to get on the other day and it worked...
my old name I think was Raid-R or some shit
Sal has a point, the hook has the same consistancy as ya first verse, there is a big difference quality when it comes to both yall verses, engineering (mixing) is off, I can tolerate tho. hook is pretty coo for what its worth i can dig it, verses were pretty decent nothing really WOW'ish but not bad at all, production is high hopish my type of steez, just keep working on the engineering aspect and you'll do fine.
-XM